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Hypertonic Solution. by ~Silica-Streak:iconSilica-Streak:



As a worm on the sidewalk, dancing from the rain
Of last month's beguiling, a trickery of the crane;
It writhes in contention of contortionist views
That smoulder from the rays and the patience of the dew.

I thought it was necessity that forced them through cracks
To feed the young birdlings;
Or, engendered to lack,
The repetoire of the feminine
Or the cunning of the masculine;
Confusion runs shallow when
Genitals aren't hallowed.

One droplet was held in the highest of views
When it could bloom the cell with no salt to its pinch;
Now, anemic and fragile and stressed,
Its tonicity furthered into duress,
The end of the month is the wreck of the day
That started the concept called, "Have Merry May!"
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This is my fifth entry, for the month of May, for a year-long contest hosted by the deviant *Electrobaby.

The journal link can be found here: [link]
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interesting, i love the imagery
i feel like i can be there, to watch every thing, to feel like a part of it
awesome work

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let's make like a humble suppliant and leave........
you're welcome

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let's make like a humble suppliant and leave........
omg, your poems are always so complicated, lol...

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Unknown to the world, but deep in the forest... tiptoes delicate, tiny feet the size of bee's knees.
no worries, thats a good thing

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Unknown to the world, but deep in the forest... tiptoes delicate, tiny feet the size of bee's knees.
Do you really think so?
OH yeah, such complicated terminology, I like it :D

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Unknown to the world, but deep in the forest... tiptoes delicate, tiny feet the size of bee's knees.

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