Join for FREE | Take the Tour Lost Password?
Shop deviantART for the
holidays and save BIG!
Click here! :holly:
[x]

deviantART

 

Hypertonic Solution. by ~Silica-Streak:iconSilica-Streak:



As a worm on the sidewalk, dancing from the rain
Of last month's beguiling, a trickery of the crane;
It writhes in contention of contortionist views
That smoulder from the rays and the patience of the dew.

I thought it was necessity that forced them through cracks
To feed the young birdlings;
Or, engendered to lack,
The repetoire of the feminine
Or the cunning of the masculine;
Confusion runs shallow when
Genitals aren't hallowed.

One droplet was held in the highest of views
When it could bloom the cell with no salt to its pinch;
Now, anemic and fragile and stressed,
Its tonicity furthered into duress,
The end of the month is the wreck of the day
That started the concept called, "Have Merry May!"
Creative Commons License
Some rights reserved. This work is licensed under a
Creative Commons Attribution-Noncommercial-No Derivative Works 3.0 License.
:iconsilica-streak:

Author's Comments

This is my fifth entry, for the month of May, for a year-long contest hosted by the deviant *Electrobaby.

The journal link can be found here: [link]

Comments


love 0 0 joy 1 1 wow 0 0 mad 0 0 sad 0 0 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0
:iconjillebeancolbert:
interesting, i love the imagery
i feel like i can be there, to watch every thing, to feel like a part of it
awesome work

--
I feel like and inside out peach in a microwave....
(in other words, warm and fuzzy inside)
:iconjillebeancolbert:
you're welcome

--
I feel like and inside out peach in a microwave....
(in other words, warm and fuzzy inside)
:iconemmie-lynne:
omg, your poems are always so complicated, lol...

--
Unknown to the world, but deep in the forest... tiptoes delicate, tiny feet the size of bee's knees.
:iconemmie-lynne:
no worries, thats a good thing

--
Unknown to the world, but deep in the forest... tiptoes delicate, tiny feet the size of bee's knees.
:iconsilica-streak:
Do you really think so?
:iconemmie-lynne:
OH yeah, such complicated terminology, I like it :D

--
Unknown to the world, but deep in the forest... tiptoes delicate, tiny feet the size of bee's knees.

Details

May 17, 2008
910 bytes

Statistics

7
1 [who?]
73 (0 today)
0 (0 today)

Site Map