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Soporific, No More. by ~Silica-Streak:iconSilica-Streak:



In stunning myself with shocks of help and ticks of
Convolution;
I think to crack the serious code of Earth, its
Revolution;
When it was cold, now savagely wet, to bring some
Confirmation;
The seasons are failing, and lovers are nailing
The hammer to their rings' relations.

Why marry a marinara underneath
Consternation?
With a series of red, the foundation's gone dead
So where is procrastination?
Her name's on the list, she's ordered a dress
And her color is fire-red-blue;
How can she enjamb a truth to her will
When she knows how I feel about standing so still?

It was wickedly tiring and sorrowingly hack
When all the tilt was pushed so back
That the failure of Fahren to measure the heat
And to cook our skin as ultraviolet meat
Was not such a failure, more a cloudy shield
That works so well to meld and wield
Protection in the form of darkness and mirth;
The stupor it lifted made me love the tree's girth.
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This is a poem written as my third entry for a year-long contest hosted by the deviant *ElectroBaby.

This entry is for March, and the journal-contest link is here:

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:iconminisorceress:
You'll win. There's no doubt in my mind. Your rhythm is always so superior and your word choice is always stunning.

You will be the envy of Maya Angelou one day. You just wait for it.

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:iconsilica-streak:
I will not be the envy of Maya Angelou. I am a good poet, but she is superb and is disgustingly amazing.

But, in the hope of me winning, I want that! Thanks for the kind words.
:iconminisorceress:
Well, maybe you can become Maya's butler, and while you're leaving her mail on her counter, you can slip a poem in there, and she'll call you in and go 'Wow Butler Sean! That was amazing! Let's collaborate!'

See? Easy as that really.

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are a failed attempt to capsulize a feeling.
:iconsilica-streak:
It seems as easy as pie... to be the butler of Maya Angelou.

Wow. You just made me feel about twenty points higher on an IQ measurement. And I'm not being sarcastic.
:iconminisorceress:
I try to make people feel smarter =D

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are a failed attempt to capsulize a feeling.
:iconemmie-lynne:
awesome job! wow, I sure have competition, lol

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Come view: *Electrobaby'sA contest A Year in the Making!
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:iconsilica-streak:
It's all in good fun, and thank you!
:iconemmie-lynne:
totally agree with that, I love good poetry... I have written 50 poems this year alone, just started in January... thanks for the watch, I am going to watch you too, lol

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Come view: *Electrobaby'sA contest A Year in the Making!
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:iconsarlangcullena:
Nice rhyme schemes! You have a really good flare with words. I love the expression, "Marry a marinara"...very unique and adds to the flow of the piece. Nice work!

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